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Relentless Ticking of Time by ~RevanRockinfreak:iconRevanRockinfreak:





Sitting alone by a cold fire
To reminisce, or just watch the days go by
Growing old gracelessly
Helpless to the basic troubles of the world

The sky is a constant grey
For your mind is troubled
By the flashbacks of your past
The worst memories are the ones that last

Of when your youth slipped away
Of when your heart lost contact
Of when you were trampled on
Of when you were so alone

Everyone seems to die before you
You're alone without saying goodbye
Oh to let time slip away
So you might follow
©2005-2009 ~RevanRockinfreak
:iconrevanrockinfreak:

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I'm in one of those slow moods today, so i'm going to try to write about that...

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:iconnibola:
I like this a lot - definitely worth a :+fav:

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~inside my heart is breaking, my make-up may be flaking but my smile still stays on~

~life or death? some fucking choice!~
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:iconrevanrockinfreak:
thanks man!

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:iconrevanrockinfreak:
Thankyou so much!

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:iconnibola:
You're welcome :-)

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~inside my heart is breaking, my make-up may be flaking but my smile still stays on~

~life or death? some fucking choice!~
:iconglarawen:
I really like, the like ... just kind of, plodding on tone of this. It's just a dull tone and it makes it so ... interesting. It's really good hunni! A fave from me too! :D

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Fuck me harder. No harder. Make me cry.
:iconrevanrockinfreak:
Wow, I've equalled my record, and I thought it was shilt! I forced it out yesterday, the way I see it is an old man, sitting in a chair, in a dull room with mo light on etc...

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Go to [link] for a tasty Revan surprise ...
:iconlawlesspriest:
interesting piece with a haunting sense of truth to it. Nice work.

/priest/

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we are who we are.... whatever the hell that means?

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